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by roozie

person pinkwands
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG JUMPS UP AND DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!! please tell me you used my plot bunny *giggles* omg I am so excited...but since you are so fabulous I bet you had already thought of this bunny *sulks* this chapter was fantastic!! I love how jealous Lucius is :D he is so hot I want to eat him hehe
person menolly
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I missed a chapter!! And you are such a tease with the party. This is great...building the *ahem* suspense. Looking forward to more!
person hollykingham
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving this fic!! Just found it as I've been away on holiday - delighted to see you writing another HG/LM story as I love the pairing and there aren't nearly enough fics for it :) I love how you portray both Hermione and Lucius - the power they have over one another is gripping. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks for a great read! *pulls out the cookies*
person pinkwands
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woahhh totally loved this chapter!! I adore a jealous and angry Lucius and you know she is going to get it from him in spades as punishment for lying hahaha :D poor Hermione, ohhh hahaha love how she told off Narcissa hehe and how Narcissa noticed the little gentleness that Lucius has with Hermione.... ohhhhh I want moreeeeeee

ohhh I would love if she had to marry Draco but kept on an affair with Lucius... there's a good plot bunny for you for another story dedicated just to me *falls over giggling* sorry I am in a good mood today :D
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go Hermione go! Make him crazy jealous and then shag him like mad! I don't suppose we could arrange a conveniently fatal bus accident for Narcissa and viktor, could we?
person Citten
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i love it the thaught of the orbs and what lucius will do makes me tingle! PLEASE hurry and update!
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chappie. Well now, never thought what house I would actually be in but I guess it would be Slytherin, gotta be the passive aggressive thing. *silently plots the demise of everything warm and fluffy* Uh oh... he's up to something, you can tell just by the look in his eye. He want her to sit next to him so he can pull out his coin again and watch her squirm huh? Surprises around every turn, you keep me on my toes and I like that. Good job, see ya next chapter.
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I'm betting the smug bastard has a matching set of those shiny little silver orbs on her breasts for other places on her body. He would just be evil enough to do that to Hermione, but then against she might find a way to reverse the effects and turn it against him. *snickers* I am enjoying this fic very much. I have one complaint though (sorry don't kill me), I think Viktor is portrayed as too much of a pussy, he has to have some aggressive streak to him if he's such a good Seeker. Love the switch and role reversals between Hermione and Lucius. Who has the true power... The one on top or the one on bottom? *egrins* I'll definately take a look-see at your other works. Maybe you could do the same for mine(yah yah I know shameless self promotion). Keep up the good work and can't wait to read the next chappie.
person Bella Snape
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant, and when Lucius turned up behind her to answer her question! SHE BANG. Fireworks tonight! Please Update soon, this fic is leaving ME insatiable.
person Citten
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as always my dear you have left us wanting more and leaving us hanging! but all in good time i suppose, right?