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for INSATIABLE

by roozie

person *DB*
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@13 hope your going to continue this story!! i love it!! please update soon
person Bella Snape
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You evil bitch! That was fantastic! I loved the plot twist - oh yes, manipulate Draco into marrying Hermione, and yet still have the affair with her... oh Merlin, Jerry Springer would have a field day with this one!!!

GET TO THE LEMONS!
person Citten
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh you are bad!! I LOVE IT! the wheels in your head just keep turning don't they and i can't wait to see what you do with it!
person sapphire
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'am so hooked on this story this is like my crack I can't wait 2 see what going 2 happen next I LOVE it! I having been reading several fics & I will admit I have never reviewed (hang my head in shame) but i just had 2 let u know how much i'am enjoying this. CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER
person JW
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 12 - oh, I do not like Lucius at ALL in this chapter. Very bad of him to seduce Pansy (his own potential daughter-in-law), and now thinking of marrying Hermione to Draco so that he can have sex with Hermione his daughter-in-law and cuckold his own son. Draco doesn't deserve such treatment by his own father, and I hope Hermione doesn't participate in Lucius' plans. Since Lucius still wants to stay married to Narcissa, he's stuck with her. He'll just have to be insatiable in the true dictionary meaning of the word: incapable of being satisfied.
person Bella Snape
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant, Lucius is jealous of Viktor. That can only mean one thing! He loves her, and she loves him... get that bitch Cissy, and that puppy Viktor out of the script!
person JW
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - don't give in, Hermione!! Lucius is still holding on to Narcissa - don't become his kept woman!! You deserve just as much respect as Narcissa if not more.
person moxie
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it! but please more smutty goodness between Lucius & Hermione!
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, promising twist; very promising! Please update soon!
person dee dee
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi

I did not think I would like this story, because it started with a Lucius dominating a defeated Hermione. But by the time I read the restaurant scene, I was in love with the story. It is so refreshing to have a Hermione that gives as good as she gets!
I could see the story going lots of places. Maybe Lucius would get Narcissa to entertain Krum to free Hermione for himself. Or perhaps he would try to get Hermione to dump Krum by revealing the affair to him. But I NEVER considered that you would think of marring Hermione to Draco. Wonder how he would convince her to marry his son. And maybe Draco falls for Hermione and complicates matters. Draco dumps his last girlfriend because she was with his father, what would happen do if he finds out about Hermione and Lucius. I am dying to find out what happens next!

Thanks for sharing your story.

Dee Dee