rate_review Reviews

First this story should come with a warning. The first or second chapter contains a rape scene. Lucius has sex with Hermione without her consent. So, I find it offensive that you didn't state this up front. That could bring up horrible memories for an assault survivor. So, shame on you for that! A horrible story.

i just read all of insatiable in one sitting. it was good, hot at points, romantic at other times, but all in all a good story. however i think that you would get great PR if go back and update the chapters by separating where characters are speaking. try to keep a paragraph in between responses such as:
"hermione will you accompany me to dinner tonight?"

"I would be honored draco"..... also if you keep their names in the conversation it will help with other readers keep track of who is speaking. i had trouble writing conversations when i started and i still do but i found that this helps me a lot.

I'm really sad that Draco died. He's terribly chivalrous and sweet. It's sad that he won't find love himself. I mean, he told Hermione he didn't want Pansy because she was hung up all over his father...but yet he marries Hermione who is in love with Lucius and pregnant with his child... Well, I guess he had to die in order for Lucius and Hermione to get married?? Anyways, I've enjoyed the story very much.

RE: chapters one through six

Brilliant story--I love how passionate, sexy, dirty, naughty Lucius and Hermione are together! I would SO love to be Hermione, you know?
;~D

Well done--keep up the good work!

*::crying::*
I love a happy ending!

Beautiful story.

I love how passionately they (Lucius and Hermione) love each other.

I was a bit bummed out about Lucius being on the Chastity potion, and then later his despondency causing him to almost take his life--Good God Gertie, talk about your emotional rollercoaster. Thank the gods that Hermione came back to talk to him, thwarting his attempted suicide, and offering him the love of herself and their baby. It was cute that they decided to named their little boy Draco Jr.

I LOVE this story--BRAVO!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

brilliant! really really loved this story it was fab!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow. A great story. I loved how it went from happy to sad and then back to happy - always changing. An awesome story!!! Great Job. Maybe a sequel?

awesome story i loved it, sad towards the end but loved the ending!!