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for Smoke & Mirrors

by Darzee

person WiccanVampire
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooookkkaaaayyyyyyyy. That was just f**ked up if I do say so myself. This story is pretty weird so far but keep writing though.
person katzies
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME story!!! update soon!!!
person darkpyroangel06
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic. I saw it was a sequel and immediately went to read it. GREAT FIC. So then I came back to this one and I want to kill Draco Malfoy so much! For making Hermione suck him off, the phallus portkey, for making Severus and Harry's relationship suck in a bad way. *sigh* I wish he would just jump off a cliff and Severus and Harry could get back to their amazing sex at night. I mean, it's not helping either of them. And now that creepy photographer is invading Harry's dreams and making him writh under other men's hands. Oh, Sev is SO jealous... ~dpa06~
person Echo
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... Severus jealous of Harry's dream. Great chapter. Can't wait to find out what Severus has planned for the photo pervert. Please update soon
person Kateri
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, can't wait to see what Severus will do to Draco when he finds out he is trying to break him and Harry up.
person glowing_haven
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
New update...thank you, thank you, thank you...and no bloody Malfoy *wohoo*
But I guess that won't be for long, huh???? You wanna let Sev and Harry suffer?????
I hope not too much...well maybe I do, but I want to see them make up in the end :-)
And no more evil cliffhangers...you hear me?!?!?!?!?! *sigh* I guess that would be too much to ask of an author...damn...
Anyway I'm waiting impatiently for your next update.
person h33h33
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters! I'm so glad you updated so soon, and with three of them!! Yay!! Keep up the great work!
person cdkobasiuk
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh boy. Good so far.

cdk
person bloodyrose
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOw! a sequal! please continue i'd really like where this story is heading! keep up the good work!!!
person glowing_haven
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yuuuuuiiiiiii...you're back...and you leave me with just ONE chapter...*snif*...that's mean. When's the next coming?????? *pretty please*