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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Harry's children are adorable. And I love the way you portray Draco and Sev's characters. Hope to see a new chapter soon! :)
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! SQUEE!!! updates. yah! updates. please pardon the fan girlishnes. i love this fic. i dont care how long it takes you to update as long as you never abandon this fic. excellent work, love. cheers!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm on ch2. This is good so far, but I'm a little anxious on where that conversation was headed. You have in your summary that Harry's in charge- he's not going to be a sub, is he?
~Hazel
~Hazel
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story. I hope you continue with it. I'd really like to see where it goes. Thanks for sharing it.
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the way draco reason with harry.
hope harry will open up with draco and severus soon.
the way severus and draco interact with the twins is too sweet.
can't wait to read what will happen next..
hope harry will open up with draco and severus soon.
the way severus and draco interact with the twins is too sweet.
can't wait to read what will happen next..
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! I am so happy with the talk that Harry and Draco had, and that they seem to have connected. I just hope that Harry can be honest with himself and go to Draco and Severus and be with them.
And I just love how much the children have already taken to Severus and Draco! I hope thier bond just gets stronger!
Awesome new chapters.
I can not wait to see what else you have next!
And I just love how much the children have already taken to Severus and Draco! I hope thier bond just gets stronger!
Awesome new chapters.
I can not wait to see what else you have next!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Where to start? I feel quite splitted when reading this fic. This is not how I picture any of the characters, at least not Snape and Draco. However, your version of them really intrigues me. I guess it could somehow be plausible, although to be honest I would never picture Snape/Draco in the way you portray them. Also, I'm having some problems with overuse of words like "brunette" (isn't that used for girls?) and "blonde".
On the more positive note, I really, really like your grown-up Harry. Not necessarily the begging and weak Harry in the last chapter here, but apart from that I think it's wonderfully done! Ron as a father melted my heart. Even though I am not a fan of threesomes, there is something about the maturity of the grown characters and the flow and beauty of your language that makes me keep reading.
Please continue and complete this story, I'm curious to see where it's going.
On the more positive note, I really, really like your grown-up Harry. Not necessarily the begging and weak Harry in the last chapter here, but apart from that I think it's wonderfully done! Ron as a father melted my heart. Even though I am not a fan of threesomes, there is something about the maturity of the grown characters and the flow and beauty of your language that makes me keep reading.
Please continue and complete this story, I'm curious to see where it's going.
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this (and I have to say, I don't normally like 'big happy family dramas' much!) - waiting for the next update now :-D
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story very much so far. It's nice to see a grown-up Draco. Severus holding Harry's little girl is sooo cute! Can't wait to read the next chapter(s)!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I loved the spin on Ginny. I always thought that she gave Harry one of the Weasley twins love potion.