AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Payback is a Witch

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Catnip ball was a stroke of brilliance!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I suppose you meant that Part two of the Bang series is meant not to be romance then. Hahaha.
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... Kinda dark and cute. Strange!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* The end of the orchard..
person Queeny
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Here's my annual signed review to express my appreciation. :)
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!! I loved the story! :D
person Empress
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have missed you so much. I was about to send the police to your house to find out if you were okay because I haven't seen you online for a while. Your stories are so creative and so moving especially when it's about my favourite couple, Hermionie and Severus.

Now about "Payback is a Bitch". I copied it all last night and read it. A classic HG/SS story, at first at least. Then I got to Hermionie fucking the hell out of her own body. Kinda creepy but I liked it anyway. And the sense of a permanent connection between people after knowing exactly how they feel is interesting as well. Well thought out as ususal and well done. I'm glad you are back.
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope your problems clear up. :x But I'm guessing they have since this story is complete. :)
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is Severus going to fillet the two thugs in this story as well? =)
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EWWWWWWW.
You seem to like putting Hermione in gross situations! At least it's not Peter Pettigrew again! D: