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for Payback is a Witch

by Ms_Figg

person Anon
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person smmz79
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
has anyone told you that you are a genious.... i just love all of your stories.. and i am dieing from laughter right now over severus' response when he saw bagheera that was great... my favorite part was when severus thought 'it is going to take more then a big pussy to keep him from seeing hermione'
person smmz79
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god severus in hermiones body is hyterical and on his period omg i am laughing soooo hard
person wudelfin
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn I found a treasure trove!!! your such a master at this
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Domine
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've got to say that was very fun and enjoyable. Though I must ask... wasn't Severus supposed to be retiring as Potions professor? He said he was training his replacement and not doing much anymore when the switch took place.. Anyway, I love it as always.

Much love and huggles,
Domine
person preston
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3 was wounderful, a delight to read and u really fit that little side bit about ron and herm in very well as well. i have read all of your other stories in this series and i must say that u have done absoulutly supbrbly it is an absolute pleasure to see new up and coming authors... especialy when they don't mind throughing in a little smut now and again. and u really do fallow and go with the grain of their charectors very well
person preston
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wounderful ending a very great story i love the cat good sense of humor i really do like the way that u wrote this story, i can see that u put a lot of thought into it you gave the charectors a lot more thinking rolls insted of just going thorugh the old in and out. oh and i had a thought when herm was sucking the prof and hes was thinking/sacered that maybe she would bite him you should have had his cock throb or leck a little bit or somthing. but thats just iceing on the cake as it were once agin great story trully maginficent.
person Anguloce
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh you are a sick sick woman...and i love you dearly for it:)
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?