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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter much better then the last. Besides the fact that it was depressing (ron) I thought the fact Hermione and Draco had become friends to take away from the "hotness" of the story. I mean, how else is there going to be as much fire when they figure it out? Think about it...animosity yet Draco goes searching for Aurora and has to dealwith Hermione, who isn't thrilled to see him either, yet she's thinkig of Jared.
Sorry, but that's how I feel. But I still love this!
Sorry, but that's how I feel. But I still love this!
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're right. That was a good place to leave it. Please keep writing fast! I don't like this Shannon person. I wonder how she'd feel if she found out "who" Jared is. Hopefully she won't cause too much trouble?
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start!! I think this is going to be an awesome story! I like Draco so far and everything is progressing nicely...I'm excited to find out how they figure it out! That's the fun part! Write more soon!
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I wish that chapter was a bit longer. I hope you weren't rushed, but I need some good Hr/D interaction! And more of their 'other' action as well ;) I like this concept, and might have mentioned before that I am really curious how they'll find out. Here in the states, or will Draco decide to go home (looking for Aurora, of course) and ends up having to interact with Granger before figuring it out. Keep us in suspense!!!
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Very nice beginning of the story! I just need to get something straight: Has Ron gone mad, since he is at the hospital in the ward where the Longbottoms were? And how did he go mad?
Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter!
~Nina
Very nice beginning of the story! I just need to get something straight: Has Ron gone mad, since he is at the hospital in the ward where the Longbottoms were? And how did he go mad?
Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter!
~Nina
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have the making of a solid story here. I imagine that Ron is Spell Damaged from the final battle? I was a little thrown at first when I read about the blue eyes of Hermione but then I realized she must be using her potions for more than her hair. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice please update soon u got me all curious
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good informative opening chapter. Look forward to reading more. Best wishes,
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, more please! Can;t wait for them to...ahem...you know ;)
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Keep up the good work, update soon!
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