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Thanks for the explanation re your use of mudblood and muggle. It helped to explain your rationale for the use of the words. I enjoyed this chapter...Draco really is one confused puppy right now.

Wow. I feel sooooooo sorry for Hermione. She has two ignorant and spoiled brats to look after for. The poor girl!!!

I would encourage you to verify your facts from canon. Just a couple of things I noticed were: there is no eighth year, only seven for the students and N.E.W.T.S. are written in seventh year and not in conjunction with their O.W.L.S. which are fifth year. That would help tighten up your writing. I also was puzzled by the disrespectful attitude shown by Ron and Harry since they have great respect for Professor Flitwick. I could see them acting that way and saying those things about Snape but not Filius.

You have the bones of a good story. You just need to check out your facts a little more carefully.

Well, I liked your second chapter a lot. The characters seemed more realistic in their words and actions. I know this sounds nitpicky but Hermione is not a muggle but her parents are muggles or non-magical. The term used to describe her offensively is mudblood.

Hmmm, Lemons, eh? Why do I have the delicious feeling that they will be Draco/Blaise lemons? Hmmm, : )

incredible please update soon and often

gaw! you left it at a cliffie! you've got to update again soon or else i'll go mad! please? i'll give you a cookie if you update again soon!

im enjoying it. i wonder how every1 will react about the whole mate thing?

wow, so glad you came over to Harry potter!!! Can't wait until your next update

Nice Chapter!!!! Love the beginning. Look forward to another soon :-)

Has promise...please post the next chapter soon!