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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definetely yes!
I've been reading this story for a while, it was very good. Now is very, very, very good. Please continue!
I've been reading this story for a while, it was very good. Now is very, very, very good. Please continue!
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are Draco and Blaise going to find some way to see Hermione in her outfit? I want Pansy's reaction, too :)
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update Soon, Update Soon, Update soon!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A nice story but Draco and Blaise are out of character. There is no way Draco would talk to the headmaster like that...no matter how pure, powerful and rich he is. The Malfoys have a reputation to uphold. And Blaise is never aggressive toward anyone. He is sneaky and quit. Other than that the story is cool. Please update soon.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how Hermione is always quoting specific rules and laws. Hermione's insult of Draco is also excellent. I can't wait to see Hogwarts reaction to Hermione's harem outfit!
Crabbe and Goyle are not twins. Twins are siblings born at the ame time. Perhaps duo would be a better term?
Crabbe and Goyle are not twins. Twins are siblings born at the ame time. Perhaps duo would be a better term?
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story so far!
A few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing that reading over, or getting someone else to read over to make sure it makes complete and utter sense won
A few spelling and grammar mistakes but nothing that reading over, or getting someone else to read over to make sure it makes complete and utter sense won
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please update soon
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! ^^
I really like your story, keep it up ^^.
Hm, i have to say, after i read your bio, i was surprised that you were an asian. I'm sorry, but if you watch anime or listen to japanese or chinese music it isn't often i encounter ppl who is good at english. Well.. That goes for me too, i'm no good at english, well, i can't say that either because that would be lying.
Anyway what suprised me more is that you mentioned because you were chinese/japanese, ppl wanted to get in touch with you and wanna be your friend. I don't know it it's only here but anyway i don't feel they want to get in touch with me because i'm an asian. Well.. i don't have a account anymore since januari because i don't write as often as i should so i closed it but in whole i don't get that impression, maybe it is your heritage of being japanese. Cause i am a chinese but live in sweden.. Maybe that is the reason but no one have ever asked me to tell about myself.
Well.. Mostly, i think they are facinated that you are a japanese.
Oh, sorry, i just babbling on and on. You may not even read this.. But it's ok.. I have said what i wanted to be said. And like the others.. It would be fun to have gain a new friend.
Well take care and good luck with school!
Wish you the best
Yokki
I really like your story, keep it up ^^.
Hm, i have to say, after i read your bio, i was surprised that you were an asian. I'm sorry, but if you watch anime or listen to japanese or chinese music it isn't often i encounter ppl who is good at english. Well.. That goes for me too, i'm no good at english, well, i can't say that either because that would be lying.
Anyway what suprised me more is that you mentioned because you were chinese/japanese, ppl wanted to get in touch with you and wanna be your friend. I don't know it it's only here but anyway i don't feel they want to get in touch with me because i'm an asian. Well.. i don't have a account anymore since januari because i don't write as often as i should so i closed it but in whole i don't get that impression, maybe it is your heritage of being japanese. Cause i am a chinese but live in sweden.. Maybe that is the reason but no one have ever asked me to tell about myself.
Well.. Mostly, i think they are facinated that you are a japanese.
Oh, sorry, i just babbling on and on. You may not even read this.. But it's ok.. I have said what i wanted to be said. And like the others.. It would be fun to have gain a new friend.
Well take care and good luck with school!
Wish you the best
Yokki
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. It's fantastic. Does Blaise already know that Hermione is part of their group? Update please.