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for A Long Way Back ~ Editing

by Ms_Figg

person Queen Celestia
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's torture reading about food. T_T
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Adam! :)
Lol I swear somedays I wish I would get kidnapped and be made over. xD
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And where there's Andreas there is sure to be the Iboga potion or whatever it's called. I swear I should know it for sure by now after all of the reading I've done. xD Maybe I'm losing my mind. Ah well.
person Queen Celestia
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Creepy way of beauty treatment, maybe I'll take back that whole kidnapping make over wish. xD but then again I'm not so bad as Hermione.
person Sonni
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent job of plot and characterisation. It kept me at my computer until I had finished reading all of this on a lazy Sunday morning. Well done.
person Ms_Figg
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DJ: I did finish it on The Burning Pen. I always finish my stories, girl :) Except for Sahara. lol. but I might start working on that again soon.
person takemeaway
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far, just finished chapter two. Yes I find it believable...but only because you used the element of it being an ancient and heavily guarded elixir. And, as Severus Snape only shows any outward affection toward potions, the idea of him trekking through the amazon is priceless, and I love the vision.
person DJ
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First - WELCOME BACK!!!!! I've missed you so much. You started this on The Burning Pen (very apt name) and never finished it (really pissed me off since I kept checking). Loved this story. You are incredibly creative. Keep writing!!

BTW...you better finish Sahara, it's wonderful so far.