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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22~
Wow, that was alot of anger Severus released on Hermione. So violent and raw. Gah that was beautiful.
Wow, that was alot of anger Severus released on Hermione. So violent and raw. Gah that was beautiful.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23!
ARRRGGGG! Gah! Hermione is so annoyingly stupid!
ARRRGGGG! Gah! Hermione is so annoyingly stupid!
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26~
Aww, I got all choked up when she ran towards the ship. So sweet.
Aww, I got all choked up when she ran towards the ship. So sweet.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27~
Such adventure! That was a good ending.
Such adventure! That was a good ending.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
veelamurmeli: I added Adam because I like him. Period. I didn't want to draw Hermione's physical improvement out too long, it would have been boring as hell to write and twice as boring to read IMO, so I used Adam and his beauty shop as a device. I'm sorry that the use of the character ruined your reading experience and you feel you can't go on with the story. It's frustrating to get into reading something and then...well nothing. A shame really. But you have a right to voice your opinion concerning my reuse of original characters, imagination, creativity or original plotlines. That's exactly why there is a review board. Thank you very much for your comments.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2!
That was intense. At first, I could not believe that Severus would kil her cat, I was shocked. I even thought, not even an evil Severus would waste his time to touch an animal. And here was or beloved Potions Master doing this.
And then it came back. And that weas really cool. Severus... only he would use that as a tactic.
That was intense. At first, I could not believe that Severus would kil her cat, I was shocked. I even thought, not even an evil Severus would waste his time to touch an animal. And here was or beloved Potions Master doing this.
And then it came back. And that weas really cool. Severus... only he would use that as a tactic.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Five:
Hermione is actually very annoying in this one. Like you just wanna slap her. Kinda hard to read. And very OOC!
Hermione is actually very annoying in this one. Like you just wanna slap her. Kinda hard to read. And very OOC!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six:
LMAO! Well Severus certainly knows how to get Hermione to do what he wants. He is so wonderfully sneaky! GREAT chapter.
And my bad, I forgot to sign in on my last review, I hate Anon reviews.
LMAO! Well Severus certainly knows how to get Hermione to do what he wants. He is so wonderfully sneaky! GREAT chapter.
And my bad, I forgot to sign in on my last review, I hate Anon reviews.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Hermione IS annoying. lol. But as far as the OOCness, she would have to be in order to show how much she's been affected by killing Harry and living the kind of hermitic life she lives. Emotional turmoil, depression or breakdown does make people change their behavior...and recovery is realized when the original behaviors return. So, there you have it. :)