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for A Business Affair

by roxierose13

person acr
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. Evil!Ginny is scary.
person Incessant_Darkness
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Especailly Pansy. usually I hate Pansy on pure principle, especailly when her presence means that's Draco is a taken man but in this fic she's almost bearable.

Anyways I love the fragile little thing of a relationship between Harry and Ginny and I most definitely love the fact that Draco is essentailly going to be Harry's boss, that has so muxh potential I won't even say.

Anyways wonderful chapter, and thanks for making Monday a little bit more fun.
person WrittenMatrix
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it so far! really excited to read more! keep up the good work!
person MaddiChan
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest? Update!
person Incessant_Darkness
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting. You know I've always been a fan of your work. Though it's weird to think you've only been writing for a year. Anyways the idea is cool, adulterous if anything but I suppose that's the point. I can't wait to see where this is going and I rather do hope you update weekly. I loved it when it was every friday with ITC but I suppose mondays are bit more torturous than fridays so this would be a bright spot. Hope to see another update soon.
person The Doctors In
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems to be off to a fair start. No complaints on the story writing and there is no need for me as a reviewer to point out anything in the context of your writing. Not interested if your in school or not, not interested in a chatroom with you, the only thing we have in common is the writing of this fictional story, as what you advertised in you summary. Have my own life and wont bother to burden you with that either. The Doctor.
person acr
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good start.