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for A Business Affair

by roxierose13

person Anon
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:( please continue this story dont let it drop cause I would cry ^_^
person alyx / silverdragon
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOO...it's getting juicy. it's just always felt sort of wrong?! what? sex with a girl? for harry? of course. cuz he and dray are destined to have a little more than just a 'business' affair. if ya know what i mean. hint hint *wink wink nudge nudge* keep up the good work girlie!
person Incessant_Darkness
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I like the Hermione Blaise relationship you've got going there. And the build up is nice. I can't wait to see how things will turn out, especailly now that Harry's been put in the world is against me mindset, that's always amusing. Great chapter.

Oh and by the way I have the sequel, I just have to type it up. Though I think I'll send you the little bit that I do have just to check on the tone, to make sure it flows with the original.

So conclusion: great fic, can't wait to see where it goes and I'm liking the fact that this has a different tone to it. Very nice. Update...well on Monday, I guess.

- Incessant_Darkness
person yay!
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
perfect! i can't wait for the 5th chapter :)
person The Doctors In
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dont give up the ship this story is just starting and I am sure that it will evolve. Less authors notes would allow the reader to get into the story and that could make a difference.
person Alison
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What?!?!?! Not enjoying the fic?!?! Whatever gave you that silly idea??? I've been waiting (very patiently) for it to be updated and that was a great chapter! I love the idea of Draco owning Harry's team. hee hee I can't wait to see where you take it from here.

Please update soon!
person Incessant_Darkness
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's Monday. I totally forgot. Anyways now that you've sufficeintly distracted me from writing I just have to say that I enjoyed that chapter. twas very nice. And I like the fact that you kept the Harry Draco confrontation short.

Oh and as for Blaise, I've always imagined him as being Caucasian as well and I can't get that out of my head so I write him as so. But that's just the way I work, so it's nice that I can keep that picture in my head for your fic too.

- Incessant_Darkness
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fic! Isn't Blaise Black/Italian you know he could be both.
person Alison
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco's the new owner? Oh boy! Harry best show up on time! hee hee =o)

Do I have to wait 'til Monday??????????????

Man! That's just not right!

Great story though. =o)
person koryuu
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, married men XD. Its good so far, definitely has caught my attention. Keep up the good work, can't wait for next monday. =D