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for A Business Affair

by roxierose13

person Amessis
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Just love it.
person Moyima
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! The boys are finally together and happy and we have to say goodbye! Oh, the horror! I will miss this fic, but I am looking forward to seeing how you end it! Great job!
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I will get all my blubbering out of the way now so that I can enjoy the last chapter (sob) next week. HAPPY BIRTHDAY hope you enjoy whatever it is you plan to do.
person jenny
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im sad that this is the next to last chapter. I hope that you have a fun time while
you are gone to canada. I am looking forward to that last chapter.
person minea
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ha! ginny got what she deserved. i'm sad there is one more chapter it was a really good story. you did a wonderful job
person sunset20
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I really didn't want to review until later, but I can't stop myself! (I have just finished chapter 7) Maybe it's just my too enthusiastic imagination, but is there something going between Ron and Pansy??? That would be... wow :D BTW, "I want you to take him out!" best sentence I have ever read in a fanfic! Hilarious!

Oh, and I really like the story!!!! I love this Draco, he is not only sexy but funny too in a not ridiculous way! Love him!!! Great dialogues and you have a great eye for detail!! Ok, I get back to the story!! :D
person bigkt
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes, yes, yes! another great chapter. make the last one just as good won't you!
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FAN-FUCKIN-GLORIOUS! ^_^
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh... and HAVE A HAPPY BIRTHDAY!... next weekend!
person sunset20
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, chapter 8 - haha I knew it, I knew it!!! Ron and Pansy ARE having a little something (hopefully it's more than that...)!! What's wrong with Ginny? Is she maybe pregnant???- please tell me she's not!!! :( But I REALLY love your dialogues, they are really perfect. It's great how you can show in Harry's dialogues with Ginny, how difficult it is for them to do it right. You can't really know where it goes wrong, it just does, and it is really easy to see that it's not gonna work out! But we're not really sad about that, are we? haha Oh, that kiss!!! I might have to read that part again... it was sooo aawww :D