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for A Business Affair

by roxierose13

person Ann
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!! Finally the long awaited love scene and it was well worth the wait. I just hope the next couple of chapter are not to rough on poor Harry and Draco. I do so love happy ending.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, I'll admit it - I read an obscene amount of H/D slash - and this is one of the hottest sex scenes I've read in a long time, not to mention that the story is first rate too. Great job, don't know how you got thru writing that with out lots of "breaks" (fans self) I hope that Draco doesn't do something stupid and gets over this urge to make Harry jealous. Wonder who Ginny with end up going home with, and then there's Ron on the table. Can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit! that was one the hottest things i've ever read. You are truly gifted.
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're worse than me [in a good way off course]. Chapter 26 and they finally get around to some screwing, which was brillianty written by the way. Anyway thanks for that, it helped take my mind off a lot of things and I'm glad that you update on mondays becase it just makes the beginning of the week that much brighter. Great job with that chapter, I'll be loonking forward to next monday for the next installment.

- Incessant_Darkness
person yaoigirl18763
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i frikin LOVE this story. I cannot wait for the next chappie. So funny, so good, theres not even any sex yet and i'm still loving it *applauds*
can't wait till next chapter, please please update soon.
person Ariana01
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bwahahah!! "pansy ni r ngaged"
lovin it!!
<3
person LiT
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol that was great I'm loving this story and can't wait for more.... but i guess i will have to lol. thanks for ending my night on that happy note. ^_^
person daniedell
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, this is so great! I finally got around to reading it and I must say you've done a great job drawing out the tension and developing the characters. Why do I have this bad feeling that Ginny didn't actually do anything though? Ron was pretty sloshed and he may have gotten his stories mixed up. I dunno of course, but I'm seriously looking forward to finding out how this winds up. Of course I'm REALLY looking forward to the sex *grin*

Well done, don't stop, want more, do it! ^_^
person jess
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh Ron. I'd be upset if i were pansy. stupid whore ginny i hate her.
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i could so kill u right now for that little cliff hanger. luckily this story is much to delicious to kill its author so your safe. i'm just glad that you finally came out and told all the clueless that pansy and ron are together. i mean you did leave plenty of clues so only someone as clueless as harry or ron wouldn't be able to figure it out. nyway keep writing this glorious little fic.