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by roxierose13

person Leentjef
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Extraho
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooh. ginny needs to get her arse whipped- not the good kind of whipping either.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! stupid Ginny needs TO GO AWAY!! >_<
Please update soon!! #whimper#
person kalaway
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D I love that you matched all the Slytherins and Gryffs up :lol: and I've never liked Ginny so I'm ok with her being a banshee. I'd like to see more of Blaise though, I've always thought he was a great character. Keep up the good writing!
person BSunshine
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Short! In the last bit I was so afraid she was going to head over to the quidditch pitch and run in to someone there, but I think this is much worse...or I suppose, Hermione can handle herself...ah, I guess we'll see!! Brilliant as always!
person KCRae
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fabulous!
person Jien
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOO~~~~~~ UPDATE UPDATE!!!! =^.^=
person Ann
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the love scene between Draco and Harry. So much tender emotions. They both love each others touch and are to afraid to tell the other one. Ginny seems to be getting angrier by the minute. It might to fun to have Draco accidently over hear Ginny and Hermonie's conversation. Showing how little Ginny cares for Harry as a person but only as a piece of property.
person Beautifulove348
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! I can't wait for the next update!! I absolutely adore the Draco/Harry pairing and you have pulled it off perfectly! Such a creative mind:) Keep up the amazing work!
person saphire'sriver
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I love your story! It's one of the best I've ever read (and I've read a lot...)
I just hope Harry'll get a divorce soon and get rid of Ginny...
I love your style of writing and you have a great mixture of eyery thing ('everyday'happenings, information about characters lives, sex;-),...)