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by Rumpelyssa

person mary
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading it! Lucius wanted Hermione to walk around naked. Lol! Severus and Dobby noticed they loved each other but Lucius is too stubborn to admit it. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person pinkwands
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh hehh heheh fantastic!! I love dobby hehe and I love this story! great chapter.. she is a right little spit fire!
person Domine
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yep hun, that was great. Love, not like, loved it. This is excellent but I do feel bad for Remus. There is no way he will have Hermione, short of killing Lucious anyway and that just cannot happen.
Update soon, much love and huggles,
Domine
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder who of them will drive each other insane first... *lol* Your characters are so wonderfully stubborn and amazing at the same time that it's really a pleasure to read new chapters of this crazy tale. And the thing with Dobby being torn between their commands was just too funny! :)
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely evil, torturous, wicked woman! I actually had to run home on my lunch hour to read this once I saw the update email! Fabulous! Does this mean a major lemonade stand is ahead?
person pinkwands
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he he he ohh poor old remus gotta love the old werewolf hehe love Lucius though thinking of HG as a shrew hehe
person Citten
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say to that is EEEWWWWHHHH!!! Sorry it just makes my skin crawl (the Remus/Hermione thing) friend, partner in war, teacher/student, BUT not lovers! sorry. stupid question Lucious (bad spelling) thing something to do with severus' name being mixed with Lucius' name? or was it like the devils name being mixed instead? just curious.
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, take me for an idiot, but your plot bunnies are actually really cute! ;) I love the idea with those cheeky mirrors, and the lemon is on its best way to get bigger... nothing to complain about, I just really like everything about your story so far! :)
person angel
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor remus.... man .. please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person mary
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Poor Remus. He has no idea that she's seeing Lucius. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

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