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Chapters 1-19: I've been trying to get up to speed on this longer story (which, I might add, was begun before I signed on to AFF even as a reader) so I got to this point and wanted to guess at the voices before I read ahead and find out for sure. I'll probably be wrong, but my guesses are Voldemort (that was the easier one) and Nagini (his snake). They must be speaking in parsel tongue for my guesses to work. Ah well, back to reading - I have several more chapters to read to be up with everyone else.

More later...

Chapters 20-25: I guess I worried all through the story that maybe Lucius wouldn't stay 'good' and a twist would have him revert to his old persona. I'm so glad he stayed in love with Hermione.

I imagine if Remus and Narcissa really wanted another child there would be an orphan who would like a good home. Lucius and Hermione should keep the babies they make together. A changeover would have been public news to the child and he would have always felt somehow unwanted, so I'm glad Narcissa declined. I hope even the offer never comes to light.

So Voldemort dies by axe - ucky but final. I'm glad Crouch Jr. and Tonks bought the farm, but I was sad that Draco had to go. Stupid of Hermione to walk so close to Barty. She was really responsible partially for Draco's death. Draco didn't have to have a pairing in this story in order to live. I'm sure any of your readers would have stepped forward if asked. 8-)

So I finally made it to the end - are you SURE the slippery friend couldn't have been Nagini? It was much more slippery than Crouch. (Actually snakes are dry, but you know what I mean.)

Thank you for the lovely long story. I liked it very much!

Yey! I love happy endings!Awww!!! I loved the fic so now im kinda sad to see it end ;-;
And Harry and Ginny having twelve kids...I love it!! For sure now he can start his own quidditch team!lol
Well i hope to that you keep on writting some more Lucius/Mionie fics soon and i look forward to reading them...Keep up the good work!

-Rowen

thank you for a wonderful story. you did a great job with everything. i hope you write more stories.

~lol~ poor harry is going to have triplets ... im sad that tonks thought so little os remus and trund her back on him ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

I have really been enjoying this story and have anxiously been awaiting this update. However, I must say that this chapter was disappointing. It seemed to me disjointed, gaps in logic and rushed. Sorry, I don't mean this as a flame but as an honest evaluation. Overall, you're a very good writer and this story idea has been great fun.

@24. awesome story. can't wait for an update!!

*DB*

This was a wonderful ending, except poor Draco was gone.

Aww, the epilouge was almost too fluffy for me to handle-even as I write this, I'm still grinning stupidly.
I loved it though. Lots of children!
It truly was an unforgetable story. Great job!

This was really good! Loved how it turned out at the end. Looking forward to reading more of your stories!