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for Hidden Meanings

by Rumpelyssa

person mary
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh loved this chapter! I like the confrontation between Hermione and Narcissa. Narcissa doesn't know when to give up! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person JW
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13 - hmm, looks like Narcissa should meet up with a fatal accident... She has now threatened to expose Lucius' secrets, might try to use Severus to seduce Hermione, and when she put her hand on Hermione's pregnant tummy and smiled, I thought "uh-oh, Cissa just hexed the baby...." Nasty woman!!
person Dee Dee
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow so Narcisa is going to end up with Lupin? Is she the one that Snape and Lupin will fall for? If she is going to stay at the house with Lupine, she will run into Hermione and Lucius often, that won
person pinkwands
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! love the interaction between Narcissa and Hermione/Lucius hehe good little plot twist, you have made Lupin out to be so pathetic hehe poor darling
person BuckyKattGirl
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Give that bitch Narcissa what for! And I'm happy to see Remus might finally get laid! Don't keep us in suspense too long!
person angel
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love it ... man they fight like little kids .... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person Dee Dee
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and I am glad Harry did not welcome Lucius the first time he saw him. Wonder what Lupin will do when he sees Hermione with Lucius. Lupin will probably know she is pregnant by her smell or something, and go wild with jealousy. After all it is one thing to hear about them together, and it
person Citten
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay i guess i can deal with not being as long as the encyopidia, but the longer the better! :) and yes i really liked this chapter and as always waiting for the next!
person mary
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I liked this chapter too! Loved it! Especially the part where Harry was in kind of denial about them at first and then he got over it really quickly after seeing Lucius crying. I'm just wondering what Remus' action is going to be? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person Inspire
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story a great deal. You do have an inconsistency in your story. In chapter 12, his middle name is "Julius" where you have it as "Abraxas" in the chapter with the marriage vows. Please post again soon.