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wow that was great .. i hope mione and lucius can get remus and narcissa togethere... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Absolutely wonderful thus far. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes from here.

More more more,

Great chapter! Narcissa was a little upset and pissed-that is a better discribion and what about her and Remus? also i am assuming that Remus found out about Lucius and Hermione through the weasleys because you did not menchion it before. PLEASE make an update soon!

Really a nice job, I like it!
please update soon, I'm always waiting~~~~~~

omg...i love this story...but i have got to tell you...i have read all 10 books of the belgarid and malloren series...there is also to books one is called polgara...the other is belgareth...you have to read those 2 if you havent...i was working with this lady and we were talking about reading...and at the time i was into reading clive cussler...i told her i didn't like reading fantasy that much...lol...she said i got a book for you...she said i would be hook by the time i got 10 pages in...i was hooked the end of the first page...i finished that book that night...brought it back to her...she gave me the other 9 books..i read the other 9 in 2 weeks...lol...i wish they would right something esle...they are a good team...david and lea eddings...so kewl to someone else familiar with that series...keep up the good work on this series...sorry not much of a review...got kinda carried away about those books...lol...take care...june

Great chapter as always! boy though i fell like hermoine i can't believed lucius refused her advantes but all for the good of the story. i also really liked the part with lucius and dobby-how cute! i really hope narcissa will quite being so intrucive now. update soon!!!

Oooh This was good! Loved it! Love the part where Hermione tries to tempt Lucius from his work. And that Narcissa tried again to talk her out of being married to Lucius. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

I wanted to write and say that I love your story!!! I am more of a HG/SS shipper, but I do enjoy a good HG/LM on occation - - but I wanted to say that I LOVE David Eddings also! I have been a big fan since the Belgariad first came out in 1984 or so - I know, I am dating myself with that comment! I loved the story so much, I bought a second set for my best friend (one book at a time when they came out) so now that we are married, we have 2 sets of the first series, but only one of all the others!! Thanks for listening to my rave! But i really do love your story! Can't wait to see how Hermine sets up Remus and Narcissa. Too bad the main couple seem to be so loyal - a hot threesome with the Potions Master would be tasty! (but maybe that is just me)

Please more I can't wait to see what happens in the end.