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Well, I'm so glad you updated. This chapter was great, and I love your title. I thought the part about Lucius trying to get out of sex was so realitic, too. Men run so hot and cold... Although, I think Hermione might have been a bit more... hmmm... self-conscious? I don't know if that's the word... after he kept trying to turn her down. I would tink that she'd wonder about her desirability, or if he was bored with her. Especially knowing what he used to do, since he didn't even try to deny Narcissa's accusations...

But over all, I loved it and hope you get another oe done soon...

sayyida

Loved this chapter! Its really good! Love the way Hermione taunts him into thinking she's going to go back to Severus. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Just love this story; it is getting more complex with the non HG LM story lines. I can

About Damn Time, Woman! Hurry up and get everyone fixed up already! (Now what about Severlicious?)

~lol~ man .. i like how mione got her way .. hmm is remuse and narcissa starting to fall for each other ... i hope their plane works .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon ..... later for now

angel

I really, really have loved this fic and I sincerely hope you finish it. I feel so bad for Narcissa, and Lucius really was a monster. I also agree with your assessment of the Eddings' books. Although my favorite is Polgara the Sorceress. Her story about her twin is heartbreaking and wonderful...

Anyway, please update soon!!!!

Funny that you mentioned Lupin... as much as I like Thewlis' work, I still don't think he's a proper Lupin. :) Now for your story: Yes, I AM sure about the plot bunnies! They are tiny and what's present of them is absolutely adorable!! I just LOVE how you show Lucius as a human being. Oh, and of course I love how Narcissa bitches around again. *hehe* Seriously, I think you did a great job with giving her feelings and showing her differently than most stories here do. I'm really curious about Hermione's plans for Narcissa and Remus... ;) And did I mention that you did a wonderful job once again?? I can't even say that enough times!! ;)

And say... will there be weird little house elve babies in no time??? *lol* Lucius will get his first grey strays if you do so... *hehe* :P

Yes, please get Remus and Narbitcha busy and get them out of our hair! They bore the shit out of me! Let's get onto the real battle!

Ch 14 - I don't trust Narcissa... each time she touched Hermione, I suspected her of casting a nasty spell. Even if Lucius did things to Narcissa, Narcissa is the one who foisted Sirius' son on Lucius, spent Lucius' money, etc. So I wonder if Narcissa will be good for Remus - or if it would put Remus' life in danger.