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This is the first time that i've read this story and I love it.I'm glad by the way that you don't want to put Severus with Ginny! I love how you put Lucious fishing that was so funny!I think the voices in Hermiones head is Voldmort,i'm thinking we will be seeing some action out of him soon too.This is also the first story where i've ever heard of Luocius and Molly having a thing for each other,very good and orgional.You should do a Remus/Hermione fanfic.I think you could liven the pair up abit.

Ch 18 - I like Herbert! I think it's understandable he's sorting through what to do with his unexpected "retirement" and still wary of this guy who married his only child; Lucius might've offered to fish WITH him, get to know each other a bit. I don't think her smile and the presents will be enough to show Herbert that Lucius loves her; lots of boyfriends give that kind of stuff to girlfriends. It'll just take time. And is Lucius still providing useful info to the Order? Ahem.... Narcissa helping to plan Hermione's bday party?? I'm with Lucius on that - what???

Chapters that don't go as planned usually have a place and are very good! like that chapter and i really look forward to the next one!! ;) well when the dream sence comes in i will tell you who i think it is -k- see you next update!

Awesome chapter love! I got so tickled at the part about the asparagus dipped in chocolate! It reminds me of when I was pregnant with my daughter. I couldn't stand ANY meat at all, but I was a rabbit at heart, eating any and all vegetables. Even Spinach! and I had always hated Spinach!LOL... Pregnancy! What doesn't it make a woman do???

Love it! Do more soon, won't you?

Shiloh

Can I unwrap him? CanICanIHuh? Please,EBQ? (I'm glad you like the nickname and I promise I'll only use it full out when you've been really, really bad!)

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Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

~lol~awww that was sweet ... i love it hmmm i love that she wanted to unwarp lucius i wonder what the party is going to be like please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

Great story. Was very nice to have Lucius show his father-in-law the fishing spot, maybe they can do that male bonding thing.

I liked it! It was good! It seems that Hermione's dad is trying to get along with Lucius! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!