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for Betrayed

by eiriyukithewriter

schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But where is Harry? Need chapter 5!
person MrGalion
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Angry protest "YOU KILLED DRACO"!
J/k
Please do try and save him thou.
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ron blames Harry but it was Ginny's choice! Now they're both vampires! Need chapter 4!
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He just bit someone? And how did he know it was Draco? Soooo need chapter 4!
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.
person anon
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it all goes kind of fast but otherwise is OK ^_^
person Solo
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
It's looking good so far. I say keep going and I can't wait to see where it goes and if Harry will get revenge or not. Thanks for writing.

Solo
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this fic and update soon, I can see this becoming very good. So far you have a great plot that can be expanded upon in whatever direction you choose and still become an awesome story. I just hope you write longer chapters and if not maybe update with multiple ones. I am looking forward to reading more. Update soon.

TL
person orion
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i like this so far! i like how harry found out about their betrayal. are any of his old friends still friends with him or do they not like him? how will he meet draco? will harry be the dom or the sub in the relationship(hopes that he is the sub). but yea up-dates soon please!
person Reamar
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, it felt really russhed. I ssuggesst you sslow down ssome. Even with it being russhed, I sstill want to read what happenss nexxt. Pleasse update ssoon.