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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey are you going to continue this or should I just delete it from my list??
E-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com.
Please also leave your Author Name and what story you are contacting me about to save confusion.
...Ta
Aya
E-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com.
Please also leave your Author Name and what story you are contacting me about to save confusion.
...Ta
Aya
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey are you going to continue this or should i just delete it from my list??
e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
...ta
Aya
e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
...ta
Aya
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story just seemed to rushed. Like you were trying to get it over with as quickly as
you possibly could. But I'm going to continue reading and hope it gets better and more
detailed in chapter 1.
you possibly could. But I'm going to continue reading and hope it gets better and more
detailed in chapter 1.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay that took about 30 seconds to read. Seriously, you
REALLY need to slow down and make the chapters a bit
more lengthy.
REALLY need to slow down and make the chapters a bit
more lengthy.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I didn't even finish chapter 2. I'm sorry, but the
story is lacking SO much. Is this your first fic or somethin?
You could do with a LOT of practice.
story is lacking SO much. Is this your first fic or somethin?
You could do with a LOT of practice.
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I didn't even finish chapter 2. I'm sorry, but the
story is lacking SO much. Is this your first fic or somethin?
You could do with a LOT of practice.
story is lacking SO much. Is this your first fic or somethin?
You could do with a LOT of practice.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story idea, but you really need to develop it. Far too much is left out - and I'm only at chapter three. For instance, how did Harry discover he was becoming a vampire? What was his reaction to it? Also, why did Dumbledore agree to betray Harry (one would expect it of Fudge)? And so much more. If so much is left out at this point, do I really want to continue? I don't think so.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i am loving this story
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry.
I get the feeling you didn't think this story through enough.
You tend to jump all over the place and the switching between the story and the point of view are making it even harder to follow the story.
I get the feeling you didn't think this story through enough.
You tend to jump all over the place and the switching between the story and the point of view are making it even harder to follow the story.
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Not good! I sooo need chapter 6!