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for Codename: Creampuff

by Tigerrr

person MagicalAngelForever
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this is so good!!
person ancientgirl
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, okay, you are really making me feel bad for Severus. He's got to get lucky with somebody cute and smart.

I'm looking forward to chapter 8. Lemons!!!
person ShilohDarke
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I mean to tell you... I have never gotten so anxious to see something happen between those two as I am with this story! I Keep hoping that it's gonna be the next chapter up, then it just makes me that much more frustrated... I read the end of this chapter where it said the lemons are coming... PLEASE let that be the truth, cause I am so anxious to finally see that here...

YOU ARE SOO GOOD! I can't wait for more! I love it! It's awesome...

Oh, and by the way... To Severus, Bad form ole boy! Never beg and offer to use protection... that just makes the person you are propositioning that much more insistent on refsing!!! LOL!!!
person Chavela
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!?!?!

Please update soon! I am just freaking for MORE!
person ZombieDuke(not logged in)
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAWD-FUCKING-DAMN THAT IS HOT!!!!!!!!!!
Lucius Malfoy... he has GOT to be the most evilist/sexiest villian on the earth!
I love this series and I am SO HAPPY that you updated!
person LaBibliographe
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm not sure I can read any more of your story. I've been laughing so hard, I'm afraid I'm going to break something. My family thinks I'm nuts, laughing so much. I have to wipe the tears away to keep reading. My very favorite line is from Lucius in Ch. 4. "Then get out the marshmallows, Granger." I laugh again every time I think of that line.

Lucius is so very Lucius - arrogant, snobbish, sexy, and so terribly adaptable and charming. How can anyone not love that totally flawed stud?
person ancientgirl
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn those Weasley's!
person moxie
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say - I really, really enjoy this story. And I'm glad you threw your fans a bone and had Hermione and "Lucy" progress in their, uh, physical relationship. Can't wait for more.
person Ryo Hija
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is becoming one of my favorite Lucius/Hermione stories. It's funny, sensual, and simply very well done. :-) I look forward to more!
person ShilohDarke
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh MAN!!! That was totally unfair! I mean... We almost had lemons!!! I was so absolutely ready for it, and then... DAMN! I could feel Hermione's frustration! More... Now! I mean, start writing! (tee hee) just joking! Wonderful chapter! Can't wait til the next one!

Shiloh