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for Codename: Creampuff

by Tigerrr

schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person lisa
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god an update!!!! Love it. They sure didnt wanna leave. and it's sweet how he finally confided in her and it was just sweet and tender between them. And omg the order meeting, kissing right in front of everyone lol but Snape knows he's Lucius but the others . Omg I just cant stop laughing. that was so funny. lmao. I guess that will heat the rumor mill up and lol maybe the weasley men will leave luce alone. lol *shaking head still* More more more please. Update again soon please. I love it.
person LaBibliographe
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is so light-hearted and yet so seductive. You have the touch for giving him a fuller personality with a happy side and a sense of humor. I like this Lucius very much. Hermione stays right up with him as a strong person able to keep him in check - mostly. His sudden forbidding side was so believable too. He's just so real! And I wouldn't be at all surprised to learn he planned Lucy's kiss with Hermione just so he wouldn't be bothered by the lads at Grimmauld Place. So what's up the stairs? You can tell me. I won't tell anyone else. Really! 8-)
person Lyssa
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that'll make severus look like he got off on that kiss...giggles
person Ladytalon
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to thank everyone for your kind reviews, and let you know that I have NOT forgotten about this story at all...it's just that I have so many other papers to write and if I start on Creampuff 10, I'll delay the others until one day I realize that they're due the following morning. If there's anything you, the readers, would especially like to see happen - please let me know and I'll see what I can do ;)

Again, thank you so much for reading and reviewing - it really means a lot to me.
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Shilohdarke
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wo-boy!!! That was a very DEEP chapter! I was NOT expecting that one... I loved it, as always! I hope to see more soon. I wonder which reality he saw will be the closest to the one he finds? I hope that if something bad was supposed to happen, that his glimpse of the possible outcomes will help to warn him of the danger BEFORE it is too late!

Love it! Want more soon! oh, and wen you get a chance... I know there is at least one chapter on MR waiting for your review(hint Hint) I won't force you to check out Sensuality's Slaves cause I'm not even sure what I think of that one yet!

Anyway, I hope to read more from this one soon!

Shiloh
person LaBibliographe
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your way with words describing the lemon is so natural and flowing. It seems like they just roll off your fingers into the computer. Your talent with lemon words just took me right into the scene - of course I could have wished to have been transported into Hermione's body, but she wouldn't leave, little witch.

I really enjoyed the rest of the chapter with the glimpses of the future and the children. Lucius and Hermione admitted they love each other. Big event. I can't imagine where you'll take this next, but hurry and finish your seven papers.
person 99
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just wanted to say I love your story and wow, your premise is so original! Thanks so much for updating! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED this chapter! Thank you with leaving us with a good, long one! How sweet - he finally said the words. *sigh* There was a great balance here between sex and emotion. Hmmmm...I wonder what his hair looks like in the future...