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for Codename: Creampuff

by Tigerrr

person ShilohDarke
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was so cute! I can just see Lucius in a French Maid's costume! And I can see him punching the other guy and Severus trying to keep him under control while He goes balistic! Excellent chapter! I am so glad I saw it! I got your review as well. In answer, I can accept that you don't leave a review every single chapter, as long as you give one every once in a while letting me know you still enjoy it!

I definately enjoyed this one! It had me laughing till I almost cried! I am looking forward to more... Soon!

ShilohDarke
person lisa
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chappie was so funny, I was lmao. Lucius and Dumbledcore's lil go round was funny. I wonder where Hermione is? and lol Severus had to stupefy Lucius which I bet made his day. I loved it more more more please. Update soon please.
person LaBibliographe
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I should never, never read your chapters while I'm at work. I just hope my office has thick walls. I laughed so hard, I was crying.

I really like how Lucius is learning to love Hermione. They are such a funny, prickly, loving couple.

And Aberforth and the goats. I'm just glad I wasn't drinking anything at the time. Lucius discovering Hermione's stash of sex toys and the way he teased her, "And to think, they couldn
person Lirela
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOD! the whole apparating into the meeting was EXTREMEMLY FUNNY!!!!!! I loved it!
person Ladytalon
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL @ everyone thinking that there was something really good up the stairs...there actually wasn't to begin with, but since with so many wondering about it on the review board here, in emails, and on my LJ...well, there really IS something up there now. Thanks for all the reviews, and I am writing chapter 11 as fast as my little fingers are able :)
person ldf
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness. that was just too
funny. Lucius popping the two of
them into the middle of a meeting
while kissing! that was brilliant!

and the image of Snape sitting with
his mouth open, tea dribbling into
his lap. that was so funny!

i positively loved this chapter.
thanks so much for the update. i
enjoyed it quite a bit!

~blessings~
ldf
person Chriancar
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bless you, Oh dear God, Bless you. *wipes tears from eyes* AHh my sides they are killing me from laughing. Moody's eye and Snape pouring tea all over himself. I'm surprised Ron didn't have an annurism.
person ZombieDuke
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!!!
Oh man, I love this series! *wipes tears from eyes*
The last bit was cruel but I can just imagine the little talks Dumbledork is going to have with 'Lucy'!
Keep up the excellent work, My lady!
person ancientgirl
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I had a feeling Lucius would at some point kiss her in front of everyone while in the guise of Lucy.

Now, I'm REALLY wondering what's up that staircase.
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!! an update, an update... I'm so sincerely happy! I was beginning to worry about you! I was afraid that you had lost interest in the story and had left it. (I mean, I was totally concerned!) I almost sent you an e-mail the other night just to ask if you were okay... But, you posted... it's okay! She didn't desert the story... I'm satisfied. (shakes finger at Lady) Don't do that again, missy! Or I may just have to beg and plead for another update...

I loved it... It was an especially good touch for them to come back smack dab in the middle of the meeting... Tee hee... I can just imagine!

ShilohDarke