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for Codename: Creampuff

by Tigerrr

person lisa
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh dear god Hermione has done it now. Poor Lucius. and he's so angry with her. And she didnt mean to do it. And now Poor Lucius will be tortured. and possibly have to bring Hermione to Voldermort. Ohh dear god. That will be hard and there will not be anything he can do to protect her. I cant help but wonder if he will even talk to her when he returns , if he returns. Hermione will be soo hurt. However in Hermione's defence. If Mrs Black saw them at the headquaters then she would be able to tell the other portraits at the Manor and it wouldnt have mattered that they saw her at the manor. In fact Voldermort may have a good idea where headquaters are and attack. Due to the painting hanging there. Just food for thought. More more more please. Please ohhh please update soon. I love this one and c ant wait for more. rl sucks sometimes lol. goodluck. hope you find time.
person Lady Lynn
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH NOOOOOOOOOOO...............................
person Ladytalon
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lisa: You're a lot closer than you know with your assessment of the portrait situation. We'll find out next chapter what's really going on though, now won't we? ;)
person salsa
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Lordy!! What a cliffhanger! don't wait too long for an update!!
person LaBibliographe
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea!! Another Chapter!! I had to go back and reread the chapter before it, to catch myself up and I howled with laughter - again! Luckily for me, this chapter winds up on a more serious note. The idea of Hermione showing herself to the portraits of the dark wizards was great. Very inventive. Lucius had every right to be mad at Hermione for going up those stairs. He'd specifically asked her not to go there and she instantly chose her own selfish desires over his courteous request. I think she has a bit of growing up to do yet.

What's more fascinating is that you originally didn't have a plan for those stairs, yet they became such a clever subplot to move your story forward. That's often the way it works. Things just come together.

I hope your RL can merge with your writing for a while (if your studies have waned for now...) Update desperately needed here. Please don't torture Lucius too much. Is he going to appear as Lucy to Voldie? That would be...interesting...but I hope it doesn't happen. Lucius has enough problems. Bad Hermione. Bad. Bad. 8-)
person Annie
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
person 99
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just wanted to say thanks for updating. I just love your story
person alyson
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
person ldf
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my, that was lovely. i particularly
enjoyed the bit with Snape and his
question about Lucy's knickers. not to
mention his quest to get into them. this
was so great to read after a 13 hour day
on my feet.

thanks so much for updating. i truly
enjoyed this chapter.

~blessings~
ldf
person ancientgirl
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yikes, feisty Lucius! LOL.