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for Codename: Creampuff

by Tigerrr

person catysmom
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more plz.
person Citten
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ouch. does not even begin to explain what just happened. boy those griffendor qualities really are bad news, they just seem to get them in more trouble. thougt you cant truely just blame her if lucius had just given her even a small explaination it would have done a world of good, she would have understood. well i have just read this story for the first time and am enjoying it greatly and would love another update. you are so funny!
person tasha
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! I was very happy to see an update...but now I'm really impatient for more.
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man that's sooo good.
person Shilohdarke
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap! that sucks! Oh please, don't let Lucius be hurt! Man!!! Why isn't there an update yet? I am begging! Please update soon! And Please don't let Lucius be mad at her for long! (although, I would understand if he was!)

SD
person firewall
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 12 - What a fantastic twist to your tale. It increases the tension immeasureably. I can't believe she was so stupid as to not think of the ancestors moving between portraits. Mind you, Lucius' brother seems rather charming. Mind you, it's interesting that Mrs. Black has never let the secrets of Grimmauld Place out in canon, isn't it? I've also wondered how they knew a witch or wizard was not pureblooded. Maybe it's because they are so few in number that they are all known to one another. Anyway, this chapter was as I said, fantastic.
person skye
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've got me laughing, crying and sneezing ( okay, the sneezing is due to a cold..) this is funny funny! but with depth and a touch of serious charm..oh yeah...and lemons! ( i tried for italics but couldn't get it!)
Skye
person allie
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
person Ophiuchus
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok...there is some inconsistency here. Lucius freaked over the portraits knowing about Hermione, but Mrs. Black mentioned Hermione at both Grimmauld and the manor gallery, implying that she has access to information from both places, so she would have been able to share the information already.
person ancientgirl
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap, poor Lucius. Well damn that Gryffindor curiosity!

I loved Constantine.