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*snicker* this is hilarious I love it! what a refreshing change from alot of the cliched fics that are out there, I hope you update often..will this story be plotted or a short PwP?

A promising start indeed. I do love a LM/HG fic, especially wen its original AND well written, I cant wait to read more and sincerly hope you're a regular updater LOL

Oh I love it. But dont make Lucius too OOC. Darkness is his charm.

Such a lot of fun and great ideas on only once chapter - I'm amazed and hope you'll grace us with many more chapters to come! :)
The first few lines were already hilarious, but when I read one I thought it's impossible to even take it higher. Just give Lucy (oh my God, that's just too funny - the real Lucius would kill you if he truly existed *lol*) enough nerves to get through this. And a bravo on the Narcissa/Lucius thing... just a few stories tell about their marriage and past, and this version sounds very convincing and good (fertility potion and Ogdens - that's almost too fabulous to believe!) - where do you get all those ideas?? They are wonderful, especially with your style and the funny sarcasm that just mirrors Lucius, sorry, I meant Lucy. ;) I'm curious if Lucy will get her period one of these days (he was turned into a real woman after all, right?) cuz I'm sure that will cost a lot of nerves on the behalf of others... hehe

tbc!!!! I can't wait, this one sounds like it's my sort of plot! I love this couple, and please get to the lemon soon...

Oh god! The idea! The potential! I love it! I daresay I haven

*snerk*



Lucy




*snerk again*




More please!

Lucy? Breasts? Dear god, this is cute!