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for He didn't have time

by AngelofSorrow

person Varjo
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Witch ones first? Good or bad...? I'll go with the good first, the story's great, the plot is interesting and not the usual Draco/Harry thing. I like it, very much. Then the bad, the spelling's terrible and you could really use help with forming sentenses and at placing the capitals where they should go. Other than that, great story, and I hope you'll update soon.
person sweetteetwo
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Iam glad that Harry haves family to help him thru this time in his life. when you up date could you please let me know at sweetteetwo@yahoo.com thank you.
person Outlaw Angel
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!!...It's me again...hehe...I can't help it but I really like where this story is
heading...Hope you make the appearance of Draco much sooner...
I really really am hoping you would update as soon as you can...
Plus I wanna know what will happen to Oliver...(make him suffer)...*blushes*
that's me thinking...hehe...update SOON!!!

With much love...
Ya ne!!!
person Outlaw Angel
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY...another chappie!!...I like it...you should make Oliver Wood SUFFER!!
Poor Harry all alone...hurry up and update...
Can't wait for the other chapters...

YA NE
person momoko
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, and it is aurors not auras
person lilio
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please
person mayoke_ai
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story's very sweet! I'm interested in seeing where you go with this...please update soon!
person LadyIsis
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is great, is there going to be more to it, I really hope so, I was so sad when the other story that was using this song was taken down, But I think you are doing an excellent job and hope to see more of this story!!!
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you gonna continue this or is it just a one shot? you should make it longer
person Allison
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I take it theres more? Now Draco has to come and save him! hehe please update soon!