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for Midnight

by avari20

person landrade
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it. I think that you should actually continue this fic and explain how Draco gets Hermione in the end.
person manda
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT. WAS. AWESOME!! I'm speechless.
person Moonstar
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definitely on the dark side...but interesting nonetheless....perhaps a sequel is in order? *wink*
person miko
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well.... I have to say that this was beautifully obsessive.....and extremely well written!!!
Please tell me that you will continue this story!!! I would love to see what else happens!!!
person T
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, Ava!

This stroy is AMAZING!

Its so beautifully written, even though Draco is kind of delusional about Hermione.

I would love for you to write more because this story could go so many ways.

And I think the whole Draco trying to get Hermione pregnant is definetly a great
finishing touch because in alot of other fan fictions you know Draco wouldn't want anything like that.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more to this because its a nice, fresh new story and is very different.

By the way I love off limits, but I haven't read Future Parents Program but I'll get around to it!

I just adore your writng style so PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSE CONTINUE!

lOVE T

WOW I LOVE THIS STORY!
person SlytherinsWench
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just telling Lorett that it really takes a good and talented writer to explore things that scare them, to let the story take them where it needs to go to be whole. This really did run the gamut of emotions both for Draco and the reader. I found myself raging at him, but yet, I could still identify with him, I could reason it out as he would. It was a great character sketch and really exemplafied his longings, his immaturity, but still that power that we sense in him. I'm glad you posted. XOXOX