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OMFG!

While admittedly dark and scary I certainly could see Draco here. The push and pull of his out of control emotions are enthralling. I think you did a great job with Draco's POV. His conflict and inability to resolve it certainly pushes him beyond his limit.

Awesome fic!

Beautiful. I love this fic.

Definitely reccing @ FT (http://forbiddentruth.gillyweed.org}

First of all, this is one hell of a piece of work. I absolutely adore this, and you must, must, MUST continue this fic. A one-shot doesn't even come close to doing it justice. I for one like a little darkfic from time to time and this, for being essentially a rape story, actually sort of endears Draco to me, and I desperately want them to live fractured and happily ever after. Besides, their kids would be cute. Please continue this, do a sequel, something! I'm not above begging, haha.

**And it's not like I don't love your other stories, just that this one is special. x3**

Wow I really love this. It's just so so so believable I guess is the word for it. I love the way you made Draco, obsessive, uninhibited, but at the same time afraid. You gave this character great depth. I know you probably won't continue, but it would be brilliant if you did. 5 stars.

Ooooh, creepy Draco! That was good, I liked it.

this story begs to continue...

Disturbing.

But I loved it! I couldn't sleep tonight, so i figured I'd read some fanfiction. But I might have more trouble sleeping because of this! (but seriously, that's a good thing).

It's got that disturbing qualities of a storyline like.. say that of One Hour Photo (if you've seen it). It's creepy, but you don't hate the character, because they seem so real and not like a monster.

it's hard to explain.

GOOD JOB!!

Okay my darling,

FIRSTLY, *claps hands happily* You did a GREAT job here. I read it and it just keeps getting creepier and darker and more obsessive each time. I read again the Hermione part and I really think that there was this subtle implication that she was *very much* aware of what was going on during the whole incident. You can almost feel her as a second layer of awareness in the air, almost like she's a detached observer spiritually to what is happening to her physically. Anyway, that's what I got out Hermione's part. Interesting as she never does more than register a few subtle facial movements, but yet you STILL convey her emotions so powerfully.

And, I've gotta say the most disturbing thing to me was that he was hoping to get her pregnant. The "Grow big for papa" thing gave me the shivers. I was like EWWWW. LOL And you KNOW how very much I adore Draco. For me to get creeped out, it takes a lot.

I'm trying to remember all the things we discussed so that I can put them here for you to read anytime you wish..LOL. But, I think the most imporant thing that I came away with was the desperation and truly insane intensity in which his need for Hermione was. It was like a roaring fire that burns hot and bright and sucks up all the air around it..and what happens with hot, raging fires? They burn themselves out quickly. This is what I saw for Draco. His passion was so severe that I think it was destined to be his ultimate doom.

As much as I desire a happy ending for Draco and Hermione, I don't think it was in the cards for these two.

Job well done. Truly.

Congrats, love.

L

it was scary... draco was out of himelf! i like to read about draco's dark side

I don't know what you were so scared about. I like to think that in truth, if a romance like of Draco and Hermione were to be, it'd have to involve something dark and amnesic; something that transcends the gravitas and veritas of the mundane. As it is, I thought it was written with great talent. A good job was done integrating his everyday hostile countenance with his passion, a little bit of which has been known to drive men to great heights. I'm glad that he couldn't hold back, if not only for the hot smut!, but also because Draco is eventually anything but prohibited.

Definitely not cut and dry. =)