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Hey there,
One word WOW!!
Maybe you can write more on this than just a oneshot. It would be a great story!
Keep up the great work!

I love your story of obsessive Draco. Maybe you can make it into a series. It is so intense I would love to see where you take it next there are so many possibilities. Perhaps instead of Draco betraying the Order, he becomes a member so he can have Hermione. If he realizes she would never forgive his betrayal of her friends.
Maybe Hermione gets pregnant and forces Draco

Great Fic! Even though it's something that scared you, you managed really well, and you made an excellent job! I love the way you write, either comic stories or darker ons like this, you always make the ones who read get exactly what the caracters are feeling. Carry on like this! I just hope 2 things: 1- that it's not a one shot, I'd love to see how Draco will get on with his plans and Hermione's reaction to all this; 2- that you don't forget your other fics. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

This is not finsihed...you know that right? There has to be more, I have to know how Draco gets Hermione. I want to see Hermione's reaction to his "love" You have to add a chapter or 10...lol

I can't believe yo wrote that!!! That's so mean!!!!! I can't believe you!!!!!

sometime the dark side can be a good thing... this story is dark, but great. It is very well written.
and something about dark!draco when it concerns Hermione is my total kink. please say you'll write a sequel. I am not about begging. :oP
I have to know if Hermione ends up pregnant... and if she does, does she know at that point what Draco did. i soo need more of this tale...
*begging,on hands and knee's here*
awesume job, hope to see more

Beautifully morbid! Thank you.

Scary and disturbing. O_o Not one of my favorites... but still interesting. The only thing that kept me reading was your way with words.. your writing style, I like it a lot. ^_^

Well that was an amazing piece of work. I'm still sitting here, kinda shell-shocked. Draco was obsessed and a little wacko to go with it. I was a little appalled at his actions with his semen. A continuation of this could be very interesting because it could go many ways. She could find out and hex him to Voldemort and back...he could continue on and win her...she could show similar tendencies and pay back could be most enlightening...or he could continue doping her with the potion, he could become careless with the amount or she could build an immunity to it and actually wake up during one of his sessions. You can make this continue on the darkside or lighten it up and make it more traditional. I know where I would go on it. Ava, this is showin great scope as a writer...to be able to write this as compared to say, Future Parents' Program. Nice diversity. Either way, I liked your writing.

definently scary but seemed so possible. Great writing!