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Very dark and twisted!! I like obseeive Draco, he's creepy! In a good way. Good job!

This fic is beautiful! It is utterly crying out for a sequel! Maybe you could start with a pregnant Hermione just claimed by Draco Malfoy after Voldemort's victory? It's your story, but I absolutely love the way you've written Draco this time around! Cheers!

Do you know how talent you are now or you still need me to tell you?
By this story I give you 5 stars! It's scarry, yes, but I love it. It's so emotional and every vivid in your writing style. I felt goose bump during the whole ride and I even printed it out.
This is a very interesting plot and I do hope and beg you to write a sequal. I want to know the reaction from Hermione and how far Draco would go to get the girl. Oh please, for the love of whatever, write a sequal, please please.

Thank you in advance and thanks for posting this one. :)

Rasmey

A very dark Draco. I loved it. This was the perface begining for her silent tears. Nicely written too. I wish you would write more possessive/dark/obsessive Draco. You rock!

girl, why did you make this a one-shot, please add more chapter, or write a long sequal to this, i know i'm asking too-much, but your a great writer, and it would be nice to read more of your story, especially a sequal to all the good ones, you've already written. please and thank you

Scary, but awesome. I love the way you depicted Draco's thought process. It's a little unclear how Draco has the power to give the Order to the Dark Lord.

Sequel?

Come on Avari, please please, please please i beg you for god sake, write a sequal to this please. i just need a sequal to this , you don't know how good, this story is. please or please write a sequal. or at least change this from a one-shot, to a whole story just like off-limits, another one of my my favorite story from you. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE.

What happens to Hermione? does she get pregnant or what? Please write another one. Great story by the way

I belive I said to you on Yahoo, what I think of this, but damn.

Liek I said, without there being anything said in this or no sequel to let us know... you know Draco will get what he wants.
And that is what makes it all the better. So much more realistic and just raw! Like, it made your chest hurt or something. And through from frowning... I could not help but just press closer to my desk so I wold not miss a word.

Wicked! Just damn wicked!

I could see, and feel Draco's fight with himself and as well as his triumph... he was the first and no one could take that away from him. Something about that!

I loved it!

I am glad you gave me the link. I do not usually click on N/C unless I know the writer, and I do know you, I just never ventured to look into. I have been picky with angst. But damn that was brilliant!

Catch you later hun!

PEACE♥

That was the hottest thing ever.