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for Storing Up Trouble

by Rumpelyssa

schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Ooo, I hope she stays with snape when the week is up. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :D
person pinkwands
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheh he is a caveman but isn't that why we all love him so much? please severus grab me by the hair and drag me into your stores *swoooon* lol! :D

BOOO hiisssss Ron! you suck! hehe
person phistolemon
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
to be honest, I didn't really care about the relationship between hermione and ron, if you could call it a relationship anyway looking at what hermione said to ron why she broke up with him. I for myself more and more like that mysterious thing that's going on between sev and hermione :DD w0000t, I like how he's working for the good side, but somehow undercover (at least I hope he is one of the good ones, aye), though.. that he's affected by this spell on the locket, like dumbly was by the ring, makes me worry :-\ hopefully he can cure himself or something, so it's not getting too bad.

btw.. little note:
I love the idea with the mark :D mmmh, passion!
person beeky63
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! I'm the first to review! Giggle. Anyway this is a great start, very hot. Can't wait to see how this developes. I'm with you all the way on this one. Can't wait for the next update. Toodles.
person Kris
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How are you going to explain that to Draco, if he see's it... XD
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Frickin' HOT!!!! I love these two together! Can't wait to see where all this is going! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Killer K :)
person Dylan
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well wasn't that a hot little chapter!
I'm loving it. Hope you write more soon.
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting for my update. Come'n now, where is it? This plot sounds terrific, so please keep it going.
person Domine
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent Hermione/Snape fic in the works I see. *big grin* I love it. Please continue and update soon. Btw, JK really does need to drop Ron and put these two together.
person phistolemon
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice, nice so far! :-) would like to read more!