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wow that was great ... and because of bella now they belong to each other.... please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

grrrr that Bella! heheh she is up there with Ron for me in terms of prattiness lol great chapter! so hot HG getting jealous hehe :D

The Forest of Dean, I do know it, and yes it is a beautiful part of the country. I personnally love the Cotswolds. I miss Christmas shopping in Chipping Camdem. Great chapter, talk about putting the cat among the pigeons. Bellatrix is a right old slapper, lol, and it seems that the Lioness' claws have come out. Can't wait for the next one. Toodles.

Great chapter! Ron is not one of my favourite characters either, but it must really suck to be dumped just as you are about to propose. Severus is as hot as ever (spending the holidays with him? (YES PLEASE) Lol. What will Harry do when he finds out that it is Severus leaving love bites on Hermione? (OUCH).

You are still having trouble with your contractions hon (sorry! just trying to be helpful). You wrote "The purple don't look to bad" it should be "the purple dosen't look to bad". Try this....when you want to use a contraction, try saying it out loud in the long form, and see which sounds best. For instance..."the purple do not look to bad" and "the purple does not look to bad".

Anyway, I really love this story and thanks for updating so quickly. Can't wait for the next chapter, hell, I can't wait till Hermione spends the holidays with Severus. She will spend the holidays with Severus, right? PLEASE. LOL. Toodles hon.

Sorry about that hon, but I did warn you that I'm a grammar nazi. Count yourself lucky, think of my poor kids. LOL. Where in Gloucestershire did you live? I have been to Gloucester City many times. I was born in Brimingham, my husband is from South Warwickshire but we lived in Hereford for several years. In fact that is where my kids were born. When my oldest daugher was born I joked to my husband that when she starts speaking with the local accent we are moving. When she started prouncing her friends Emma and Jessica's names as Emmerr and Jessicerr we did just that. We moved to Ontario Canada, now my girls have strong Canadian accents. LOL.

Anyway thanks for the super speedy update. Blaise Zambini is too much, lol. And yeah! Hermione is going to spend the holidays with Severus, that is just too yummy. Can't wait for the next chapter. Toodles.

man .. that was great .. hmm mione is going to spend the christmas holiday with sev i hope they have lots of fun .. please please please please update soon i would loe to read more .. later for now

angel

It's great so far, can't wait to see where this goes. I love Snape.Poor Ron though, I felt really badly for him. Hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.

Yum yum! I cannot wait for the next chapter, this one was great!

Great thanks and no i lived though it! just waitiing for a new chapter!

FABULOUS! I LOVED IT! it has been awhile sence anyone has had my stomach flutter and knot all at once, so.... when's the next update? Can't wait too long I WILL GO NUTS!