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for Storing Up Trouble

by Rumpelyssa

person PhantomRose
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I bet that Hermione regrets not sleeping w/ Snape when he so whanted her. Good story love is & update ASAP!
person Citten
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH! NOT GOOD, NOT GOOD AT ALL!! okay i hope that mark makes her safe for severus, does it?! Hurry quick and let us know, PLEASE!!!
person pinkwands
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*falls over in a dead faint* ohhh Lord Voldie you make me swooooon *giggles* wow what a great chapter gimmmme more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I LOVE the plot twist! MUST have another chapter very very soon, I am very excited to see what happens next. :D
person Edania
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
shit....she in trouble.
person dragonfly
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love your story, and I can't wait until you update again.

~Dragonfly~
person angel
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man everone want mione ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person phistolemon
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
some nice chapters you wrote there! especially the last one shocked me, though, like many of us I'd guess.
I mean... voldy? LOLOL NO WAI! (well, if he wouldn't look so ugly now..) but great idea in general, I'm looking forward to how snape tries to get hermione out of voldemort's grip and what bella will do - wouldn't be too sure if she already gave up on severus ;-)
would like another 'attack' of her's *hrhr*

write more then, please! can't wait :-)
person Citten
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT need more action soon, pretty please with sugar and whip cream!
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Hoping for more yummy-ness next chapter though :P