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for Storing Up Trouble

by Rumpelyssa

person PhantomRose
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy it finnaly hit the fan now!:)Wow i love hs sory & encourage you even more 2 update every day, you hardly have people do that. :D Good luck!
person angel
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... i cant wait in till then next chapter .. please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person immortalsin
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wowwww, good story well written as well can't wait to read more :)
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, as usual! :D
person cat
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story really enjoying it so far. I love the plot and approach different but interesting. The only complaint I have is the mini rant on smoking you inserted, now its not that I support it or like it quite to the opposite considering my frail lungs, however it seemed a bit off topic and more of a rant rather than devloping the plot in any meaningful way. But overall really like the story please update soon
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story I hope you will finish it and the cliff hanger with the dark lord taking her away that was great!
person Akasha
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is gettin fuckin intense, mate!!! please update soon!!!
person Citten
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i can hope can't i, well i am glad severus has not given up. i am just waiting for your update, my lady!
person pinkwands
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh Sevvy *sobs* hehe gotta love the old boy hehe and that Voldie! not going soft on our old mione is he? :D
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yummy chapter!!! :P