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for Storing Up Trouble

by Rumpelyssa

person Megan Consoer
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Citten
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he he it is funny how kids are always misbehaving when they think that the parents are asleep! i also really really loved the part at the end with severus not wanting hermoione not doing a conceptive spell, you made my stomach turn-but in a great way! also the fact that she will be one of the most protected students at hogwart and the houses watching her make it really fun! update soon, PLEASE!
person angel
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. i hope tonks will be ok ....i love that molly scared sev a few times... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ....later for now

angel
person Lexy
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. Please update when you can.
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds great so far
person pinkwands
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! love how HG was jealous when she say the love bite and how they were sneaking around like naughty school kids! :D
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOo! Great chapter!!
person cat
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Liked this chapter a lot I am on tenderhooks waiting for the next, thanks for the speedy update.


well it seems that we come from very similar backgrounds considering our conditions and family history. I didn't mean to fluster you so much by bringing it up, it was just a bit distracting to me that's all. Sorry
person Citten
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am right with you on Tonks and Remus they are good together but as you have already put it in action the events we shall see and i am DYING to read more! so don't keep us waiting too long!
person pinkwands
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheheh lucky tonks!!! Iam jealous!! great chapter... andMolly LOL! what a crack up !:D