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for Storing Up Trouble

by Rumpelyssa

schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter one

*SQUEE* OMG--freaking lucky girl to have Severus Snape interested in her, kissing her passionately, and marking her as his woman. Damn, I WANT TO BE HERMIONE!!!
;~D

I love this story!

Oh no! You haven't updated this story since November 10, 2006. Please don't let this story be abandoned. Perhaps you just forgot to update it?
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter two

I'm glad that Hermione had the courage to break things off with Ron. What a moron to want to propose marriage when they aren't even out of school yet. Ron is an immature, little boy that has had his feelings hurt, but that doesn't make it right for him to be nasty and call her a bitch.

I'm happy that she has at least one supportive friend in Luna. It was nice of her to have bought Hermione a cup of hot chocolate.

I agree with Severus--it was sexy and exciting of him to grab her to talk to her in private and steal some kisses and caresses.

Bummer about Severus losing a good friend in Regulus Black. I think that it is fantastic of him to want to give assistance to Hermione in the search for and disposal of Voldemort's horcruxes.

EEK! Since Severus has a black mark on his chest, is being poisoned as Dumbledore was?

Is the book that he is hinting at "Potions Moste Potent" (or however it is spelled)? I'm glad that he is making sure that she realizes that he is still on their side in the war.

Mmm, I like how they affect each other physically and sexually.
;~D

Lucky girl, to have a date with him everyday between the hours of eight to nine in the potions store cupboard. I hope that Harry and/or Ron don't look at the Maurader's Map and notice them together, you know? I love how he slips right into asking about her plans for the holidays, and invites her to stay with him, for the convenience of passing information to her--RIGHT!
*WINK-WINK-KNUDGE-KNUDGE-....* *LEER* *WEG* *SMIRK*
;~D

How very naughty of him to refresh his mark upon her neck--wicked man! I wouldn't have him any other way!

It's nice to have friends that care, but when they stick their noses in where they don't belong, they need to back off and let their friend live their life and learn by their mistakes. Harry should be happy for Hermione that she found someone that she feels comfortable enough with to allow him to mark her (not that she had much choice, LOL).
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love plz update soon. I beg u its to good to let go.
person mary
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update please.
person Atrumnex
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow plz tell me its toms baby. I love tom.So good luck with life and writing.
plz update soon i'm checking every day and tomtimes twice a day.
person xXxMrs.SnapexXx
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurry and up date!!!!
person mary
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, please. I just gotta know whose baby she's preggo with.
person *DB*
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@9 awesome story!!!! I LOVE it!!! I do hope you continue it!!!PLEASE update soon
person Dee Dee
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love how Hermione feinted at the news, guess it