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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT SUCKED!
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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really a true Harry Potter fan, my boyfriend though, has got me into watching the films, and I really like this idea. The relationship between Harry and Hermione in the films is very strong, and I really think Harry could be like how you described him, given the right situation, like this one.
Like a true sex craving man, he took advantage of a situation, and I
Like a true sex craving man, he took advantage of a situation, and I
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its an ok story but it could use some improvement.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, any chance of a one shot from hermione's perspective, the confusion, arousal, hurt she must have been experiencing would be a challenge to write :)
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your fic even though it was somewhat short. The ending was a little off you left it too open. When you write one shots you need to finish with more finality. That would be okay if you were planning post a sequal but still you should have ended it with something like Harry telling her it would be okay and/or Hermione running away, but this is your fic and you can do what you want just thought I would mention it other than the ending the rest was somewhat enjoyable. Please continue.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To the person who said they loved it, thank you!
To anonymous, the ending was left deliberately open. I know some people like finality, especially in a one-shot, but I'm one of those people who adores ambiguity, and being able to make up your own mind. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.
To everyone who reviewed, thank you. Critisism and praise are both always welcome, and I'm grateful that you would take the time to read and review.
To anonymous, the ending was left deliberately open. I know some people like finality, especially in a one-shot, but I'm one of those people who adores ambiguity, and being able to make up your own mind. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.
To everyone who reviewed, thank you. Critisism and praise are both always welcome, and I'm grateful that you would take the time to read and review.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's not badly written, but I have to say I don't like it. The end is just way too open. If I want to use my imagination I would write my own story and would not read yours. I want to read your imagination! I would prefer it, if you could make this a short story with three or four chapters. As a oneshot it is a flop.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, thank you for your candour, but I have to say I disagree. This was my imagination; what is contained in the story, is the story.
Other people have asked for more, so it is possible that there will be a sequel. On the subject of whether or not stories are best left slightly ambiguous or fully resolved, however, I think we'll just have to agree to dsiagree.
Other people have asked for more, so it is possible that there will be a sequel. On the subject of whether or not stories are best left slightly ambiguous or fully resolved, however, I think we'll just have to agree to dsiagree.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Harry/Hermione that I read and I must say that it is quite unusual (for Harry's action, I mean), but not umplesant. I think you should write a sequel: the story can't end like that