rate_review Reviews

You do amazing stories. I can't wait to see where this one ends up. Pandora is a gem as a character and I wonder what is going to happen when Draco discovers that she is not a pureblood.
I would love to see what you could do with a Charlie/ Hermione or a Viktor Hermione or even an Fred or George and Hermione fic--the angst you could deliver to Ron and Harry. Your Draco and Lucius fics are quite simply luscious. Thank you for writing them.

Oh, it's just so lovely. And I had the laugh of my life when Draco was giving her sex education - that poor guy! *lol*

This fic is just so funny, I was giggling the whole way through. Her innocent remarks are just so perfectly childlike that it's funny to see her in an adult setting. The thing is though, I think that you should develope her personality a bit more, instead of having everyone drag her around. Like the first chaper. Wonder what Snape will think of her? Keep up the good work and update soon.

Your writing is great. really keeps the reader interested. Keep writing or i'm gonna suffer from withdrawl.

Thx for the sweet words, hon. :)
Now what was better... the line "Gods the old man has timing" or the fact that you're keeping their relationship at a realistic pace without rushing it. I really liked that cuz it goes much deeper than most fanfics. Besides, there was this line: "son of Lucius.. arrogance personafide" *lol* Oh my, I just love the words you choose... :D

this story is adorable. i realy hope u keep writing it.
its my favorite so far.

Winking truly is magic after all. And this wink is just for you and another fabulous chapter, hon: ;)
I almost thought Draco's nerves wouldn't make it with all the explaining, but he did a great job. As usual, your work is subtle in expressions, and I can't remember when I last read such a hot chapter. Wow! Besides, you catch the characters so perfectly well. Dumbledore will be majory pissed in chapter 3, I assume... *hehe*

Just one question: Where the hell are the other reviews?? Wake up, guys, this is magic that feels much better than Rowling's work!! :)

Jesus, that first chapter is luke fun pure!! I had one of the best laughs of my life... the giant squid winking, the "many (water resistant charmed) books"? Oh my, that's brilliant!! This story is going to be awesome. :) By the way, it's SO like "little mermaid"... hehe, just kidding. *lol* Oh, and is there a chance of involving Mr. bossy, bitchy Lucius in this? I'd worship you forever if you found a way (but I'll forgive you if not, too!). :D