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for The Beginning

by BellaBlack

schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story so far. I like it. :D

~Jessy~
person Minerva Ann McGonagall (too lazy to sign in)
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 8 - I really liked this chapter....more please!!!!
person C McClain
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the author, Minervia I'm thrilled that you love the story! Keep reading and the reveiws mean so much The only people who've told me what they think are my friends. Thank you!
person Minerva Ann McGonagall (too lazy to sign in)
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 7 - oh this was wonderful!!!! I loved the chapter!!!! I am eagerly awaiting more of this!!!!
person Minerva Ann McGonagall (too lazy to sign in)
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if this is going by the book, then James wasn't a seeker, he was a chaser....in the movie they made him a seeker to seem more like Harry....This is an interesting story....I will read more....
person ailish
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sirius to like a girl and have her say that to him. So do things change? update please:):) want to read more. By the way I like Lily's friends Ilsult and Ann. they seem cool.