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by roxierose13

person acr
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL. POor draco. though he did have it coming.
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Despite the shortness of the chapters, I am loving the plot and it is definitely well-written! Good job and I can't wait for more!
person Shardae
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Dumbledore is going to tell Harry...
person acr
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Though I don't think it makes sense for Harry to run to the Headmaster. I mean, what's he gonna say, "Draco's not being my bitch anymore?"
person Incessant_Darkness
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice chapie, and in response to what you said anyone who ditches any of your fics is a fool, a complete and utter fool cause they rock.

And you're right, this site should have review response, it would make life so much easier.

Anyways as for the story it's nice that Draco is back in the game but I still want Harry to explode. Like completely loose it, that might be fun, to see Draco scared out of his wits. But other than that I love the way Draco is taunting Harry, andI also like the fact that the Gryffies are all cowards in the face of EvilSlythHarry.

Are you planning on bringing out the Evil, Lordy, want to become the next voldie side of him anytime soon? Cause that would kick ass. [Wow is it just me or do I have a deep rooted DomHarry fetish?].

Anyways I'm glad to see you updated and thanks for reviewing my fic, it made me happy.

Keep up the amazing work and update soon.

-Incessant_Darkness
person cassie
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories! keep up the work and update soon??
person k
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I dig the premise, but there are a couple of things that strike me as odd. First of all, the spell. I'd expect something powerful to cost a whole lot more - by requiring extraordinarily rare materials, demanding great personal sacrifice, being incredibly difficult to cast, that sort of thing. Secondly, why can't Draco just do the spell again? Even if he can't go back to the moment before he cast the spell (it no longer existing in the current present), he could easily intercept himself before meeting his younger incarnation. Or he could skip ahead in increments to keep things from going that wrong. Third, Dumbledore seems uncharacteristically fatalistic about the whole thing. Still, I like the idea and I hope you continue with it.
person Elric Maxwell
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I think I like this Harry! Slick, sexy, and just...hot! XD More, please!
person Sabby
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O.....>>;.....OMG DRACO, you need to wise up!!! draco don't be is whore, U can so scew him better then he does you! Great job can't wait for the next chapter make it longer also.....give draco someback bone
person silverjadlyn
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Love it! I think you should def continue... and hurry up with the next chapter... and I also think you shuold have them fight , and have Draco win, just so he can state that he isn't all submissive anymore! Anyway love it plz hurry with the next chapter!
Jadlyn