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for Total Eclipse

by Given2Fly

person me
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story, so i'm glad that you will be continuing
person Joanna
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I have been following this story on Coloured Grey website and just want to let you know that I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. I like the fact that the story is fresh (no one has thought of this concept before). I think by explaining things later as the story progresses captivates the readers. I know cuz I'm hooked!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Can't wait to see what happens, thanks so much for the update, and hope we get some action and tension soon!
person ocard
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was excellect!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE! MORE MORE MORE!
person Anon
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused :( I just read through some of your previous reviews, and someone said "I can't wait til he finds out she's pregnant." .....is she pregnant, or does she just work in a feild that develops new types of potions? That's how I initially took it anyways....
person Maria
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter =D
person pumkin
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it. update soon please. it's going to get realy interesting. i can't wait.
person stacy sanchez
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a great story please update soon!
person mitz
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh cant wait until he finds out she's pregnant
person Lillian
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! LOVE IT !!! WRITE MORE!

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