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for Riddle Her This

by Rumpelyssa

person Sapphire
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! Getting married to an older man ... ... But Severus Snape is right, even though I hate to admit it, but Harry and Ron can't protect Hermione forever and they are idiots ... Hermione's the smart one in the group; that's obvious.
person angel
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ... please please update soon i would lvoe to read how mione will get away from snape and back to tom ... ..later for now

angel
person Miepje
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so love Minerva! And Severus Snape who knows all about Hermione's past.
That was a great chapter, and I'm looking forward to read what will happen next, in Hermione own time.
person Shygirl
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, can't wait for next chapter.
person Jamie
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story so far (Chapter 2), and a rather like the idea of something between Albus & Minerva as well ... it just "feels" right.
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Didn't mean any offense, I know my writing isn't perfect, I didn't mean to imply yours anything less than great either and trust me, my getting things confused did not stop my enjoyment of this story one little bit. I love how calculating Tom is and how he thinks he has all the answers, forsees any problems. I'm almost loathe for Hermione to get back to her own time and see how the 'Butterfly Effect' has taken place. I'm sure this isn't the first time Tom has used physical persuasion to get what he wants. Looking forward to more. :)
person pinkwands
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh you are doing his character more than justice, I can just picture him like he was in CoS when him and DD were on the stairs watching Myrtle be taken out. So full of confidence and arrogance. I hate to see poor Albus used hehe but he and Minny mustn't hold a grudge if they adore HG in her time :D so yes I think you are doing a great job darling!! :)
person angel
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. that was great .. i hope minerva does not hate mione to much when she gets back to her own time ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo! I love the story so far, looking forward to more.
person Amelia
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I can't believe that Hermione is so caught up in Riddle's world! This story is awesome! Keep it up and update soon!