rate_review Reviews

What an amazing ending to a very awesome story! I loved this story and will certainly go and read more of your creations!!! Thanks so much for an awesome story!!!

A great ending to the story. Tom's really fallen in love! But that doesn't stop him being Voldemort or the bad guy, right? Loved that "Hermione" was the last thing he said...

Hermione ending up with Severus was very nice; I personally like those two together. Thanks for sharing!

I really like this story, it is very different from anything I have ever read before.

But please can you write a Draco/Hermione story because you would write one really good, though I'm guessing you don't like that ship, eh?

Congtratulations on writing such a wonderful story and I'll look forward to reading more of your work.

Please let one be a D/Hr story though!

lol I love the ending. yay Severus got Hermione in the end. and I have read most all your stories and love them. just waiting for some of them to be continued.I love your style of writing and you can see where you have matured as your stories progress. excellent i say. and i am sorry about what happened to you. that is sad. and mean.stealing an idea is wrong. Cheer up Bella you have devoted fans. take care. and again I loved the story and the ending.

Great story. I liked how Voldemort reaized that he truly loved Hermione.

wow that was great ... im glad they save mione and lily .. and sev found happenss in ther end ..well in till next time later for now

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hi there I will try not to whine to you too much. I love your stories and they are fine the way they are.what you have is very painful and debilitating so i understand the need to reduce stress. I hope you continue writing, i love to read your stories. I think they are perfectly fine the way they are. and I do hope you continue them all. I love this one and the Narcissa one. they are completely different ideas from the norm., not that I dislike the norm. Severus and Lucius are my two faves. as are a few others. so I love reading all stories. I just happen to think you are talented and I love your style. so Keep up the good work and I hope to see some updates when you can make them. I will wait patiently and keep an eye out. Goodluck Bella and keep up the good work. a devoted fan.

Im Really glad that even with your problems, you find a way to make yourself happy and in my opinion useful, because like me I'm sure that out there are a lot of people that use reading fanfiction like a release for the everyday life (Im a MD and my life can get pretty stressfull sometimes), and to find a well written ff and with this kind of immaginative and stimulating plots its really hard, but you have succed, so what if something its mispelled here or there?
Anyway I'm rambling a bit, just want to say that thanks to you I'm a bit happier, you've help me a lot, please dont let that ignorant or crazy people tell you otherwise, because people like me live thinkin how and when the next chapter its gonna come out.

Congratulations, you're a very good writher. Please keep up

You've may notice the grammar horrors and the mispelled words, but, English it's not my native language. I hope that you can understand my message and bare with me a little. Bye



PS Update soon please!!

good for you! if readers don't like authors that don't always have betas then they shouldn't read fanfiction! keep up the great work, I don't think you need a beta, your doing a wonderful job without one already! keep up the great work!

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Please have this story reviewed by a betareader. While the premise is fascinating, and you are implementing it rather well, the numerous grammatical and usage errors are distracting.