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for THE END

by nkechi

person lloy9931
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!!! I don't know if your finished or not but I would love to see more chapters. The only critique I have is have is maybe a little proofreading, but all in all I thought it was great and would love to see more!!
person ellie
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weeee im so glad you continued this fic!! its SO good!!!!
there are more coming right? :D
<3
person Tay
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooooo, good story update soon.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update?


please?!?!?
person Ellie
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS update!!!

*puppy eyes* please?
person heaven
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good pls post more... dont know why noone else has reviewed...!
person Moonstar
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No way....I'm the first to review?!?!??! I'm terribly intrigued with this story...there's just something about the "good girl" and the "bad boy" I can't seem to read enough of! LoL Seriously, great work so far! I'm itching to read more, so post an update soon, please!!!!!